Day 1: Egg Stage

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1. Describe where you were when you started writing this piece & what was on your mind.
I was in class when I started writing this piece. I was thinking about a time I was in an Uber and I was in deep thought about what I saw outside. I kind of exaggerated the animals stopping in the street so I mostly thought about movies.In a lot of scenes usually animals will be crossing the road and it holds the car up. I saw the animals as my thoughts and how I overthink about most things. My thoughts may stop me from moving or getting where I need to be.


2. What kind of sentences did you use? Are there other patterns you notice?
I mostly used a lot of declarative sentences. I’m telling the reader about my emotions and how I feel. I mostly notice a repetitive pattern of me saying “I”. I’m talking about myself and what I’m experiencing.

3. What themes do you notice in this piece?
A theme I notice in this piece is nature. I’m writing about my surroundings and all of them are the things I see outside to my own human nature. Another theme could be human condition.

4. What were your intentions for this piece? Where do you see this piece going?
My intentions were to move the piece like the car I was in. I wanted to show that as I drive off, my thoughts and feelings get deeper. The surroundings are moving me as well. Everything is movement and that intertwines with my own thinking. I see this piece being a little more descriptive.